All Comments on 'Billion Dollar Slaves 01 Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago

very good beginning. Mother and daughter must be totally degraded and perform like circus animals in front of former girl friends of her daughter. Please widen the scenario. No hope of escape.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Nice beginning

The series is pretty good so far. Perhaps you could take the pair out in public and have the daughter assume a more dominant role over the mother. Lots of potential. Why not take them back to Vegas where anything goes?

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