All Comments on 'Billionaire and the Sisters Ch. 01'

I really can't wait for the next chapter. Well written, well edited, believable characters and dialogue. What more can you ask for?

I don't normally comment on stories. However this one is amazing. I can tell you are wending a great series with the Billionaire and the Sisters...

Do you realise what a nightmare this story is to the man's security officers?

Damn. I had hoped this would be a long-term read for me, but the 'treating me like a porcelain doll' line and her loving it made all alarmbells start ringing, to the point where I can't see myself reading any further. Weak women or women acting weak are a total turnoff.

Just one of the many, many precious gems:

"One of my little devils got after me. I was losing control over some part of my life, and he thought that was intolerable. I couldn't show weakness, and getting all mushy over some girl was definitely a weakness. I had to be strong, macho, and manly in this situation."

He surprises her with being a billionaire. She surprises him by being a slut!!! Sounds fair??!!

Great start. Yes , one could pick on some minor points but, who knows, these might come back into the story later.

You're talented writer. I would appreciate the opportunity of further editing. There were a few minor opportunities missed. I've copied this comment in case I need to paste it in further stories.

I enjoyed your story so far