All Comments on 'Billionaire and the Sisters Ch. 47'

Mostly your English is good, but one sentence shocked me: "Behind Cindy, Mark, and I sat a huge mirror." Surely you would not say "Behind I sat a huge mirror."?

Boring as usual. Not sure why I bother anymore.

Corporal punishment should be flagged and moved to the first half of the last centry!

I have been enjoying your story up till now. I especially liked the idea that this is a billionaire but that didn't mean he considered the girls anything less than his equal. They were all on the same level despite their gender or financial standing. Now you go and have him spank the girls as if they are his naughty children. Big hole in the background of your story and very disappointing.

Worst chapter of all.

Just why have you spoilt the whole nature of the story with this ?

The appropriate reaction for Elsa and Cindy after the spanking was to stand up, say "Goodbye Mr Worthington. We will not stay with a man who physically abuses us. If you did it once you will do it again. We will be suggesting to our other sisters that they too leave before you beat one of them", and walked away. Domestic violence should NEVER be tolerated.