All Comments on 'Billionaire and the Sisters Ch. 70'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
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Great writing, however the best clubs are not in Nebraska and Alabama, they are in major fashion centers like LA, New York, Miami, Tokyo, London, Paris, and Rome or in vacation locations for adults like Cancun, Ibeza, Jamaica, Monte Carlo, and Rio.

I went to one club where the former French porn star Jade Laroche was doing duty as the DJ with a bunch of male and female dancers. By the end of her act she was in a sheer bodysuit and you could see her tits, bush, pussy, and asshole if you were close enough to the stage. And each of the dancers were stripped down to g-strings, both his and hers. She even took a guy from the audience and gave him a lap dance up on the stage. Very erotic.Apparently she gave up pornography for life as a topless DJ.

Someone like that should be the DJ for Mark's new club, Club Infinity.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Every ten chapters or so I will provide a short summary at the start of that episode to bring new readers up to date (see below)

That's not really a plus.

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If you've reached Chapter 70 and this this is so open ended that every 10 chapters you feel this is needed, this isn't writing. It's an exercise in typing.

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