All Comments on 'Billy and David - Reunited'

by mdtchaser62

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bhart1bhart1over 6 years ago
Wow!

Hats off to you! VERY well written and edited!

I especially liked the way you connected this story to your first one without making it a continuation. It stands on its own just fine even if someone hasn't read Losing My Virginity. I think the move to third person narration was particularly smart for accomplishing that.

You're quickly becoming one of my favorite authors here. Your attention to the romantic motivations and sensory elements of their sex was first rate. I felt it all. Five stars from this fellow author (and maybe just a hint of jealousy at your natural gift for story telling ;-)).

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Beautiful

Love this story and Billy and David. You write with such grace and insight into emotions. Thanks for a great read!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

this is the best story and I love it so very much and I wish them all the very best and be happy together for the rest of there lives

take care and I love you Billy and I love you David to xxx xxx

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