All Comments on 'Billy, Celeste and Sex'

unpolished, in terms of both plot and grammar. Take your time to proofread, and please find an editor.

Personally, I love your humor.

I love your sense of humor. Keep on writing.

yourself as proofreader and hire a hooker by the hour that can read and spell. If she finishes 10 minutes into the next hour, have her put her clothes back on so you can remove them - again.

A most inventive and imaginative mind - couple that with wry direct humor - then add local language and scenery - why would anyone not cheer your parade upward and onward.

Don't change a thing except the advocated naked proofreader.

With Very High Regard

Who talks like that?

I hate this story