by wetapap
It read like a great fairy tale, like Beauty and the Beast or Snow White. Very magical story. Thank you for sharing this masterpiece.
No ! You’re crying !! What a beautiful love story. I have to admit, I cried like a baby. The love exhibited by the characters was overwhelming. One of the best, most heart warming stories on this site. Absolutely the easiest
5-😊😊😊😊😊’s ever.❤️
Never got tired of reading it even though I have read it more than ten times over the years. Definitely a five star 🌟✨🌟✨🌟✨🌟✨🌟
I guess I could write a lot of things about how much I enjoyed this story but I won’t. I’ll just say
Thank You!!
I have to say you got me with this story..fantacy? yes.But very good. I am not into romantic stories at all,but this one hooked me from the start because of your writing ability and realism.I enjoyed it very much,even though it is a romance...4 stars
So she would have screwed Roul if not interupted, still betrayed in my opinion.
About as perfect as a Romantic story can be.
Those of us who have experienced it our lives can only applaud.
Personally, after 53 years of a perfect romance, I am slobbering in tears as I know the pain Amber felt when Richard died.
If only such perfection could be experienced more than once.
HC
The opening
'Who cares what nonsense he spouts as long as I get to eat, I'm starving.'
reminded me of what a friend who worked for a while in India told me many years go. In the mornings the morgue crews pulled carts around loading the bodies of those who have expired from starvation during the night. When trying to talk to the poor he said they were so fixated on food they couldn't grasp any thoughts of other things.
I doubt many if any of the readers have ever experienced such hunger.
I come back to this story every six months or so, it just makes me happy. A true love story. You have to see the warts to appreciate the love.
Thanks for sharing!
DP
reread for me along with the story about Eathan or Super Dad. real rear jerkers and a solid moral.
OH, WOW
What can I say? This story just floored me, I love it!! I gotta say this story not only tugged at my heart but almost yanked it out of my chest, as well as making me dehydrated from my misting eyes. DAMN!! KUDOS BIG TIME!!
It's now 2021...and after reading previous comments...this is a love story. Everyone that's been in love can find a piece of him or her self's story in these pages.
I cried. Joy fills the heart and you just cry. It’s how everyone dreams true love should be. The story will remain well after the pages close.
Thank you
I am so glad that I am able to read this story. Its really good and beautiful and romantic story. Definitely a five star rating 🌟👍🌟👍🌟👍🌟👍🌟👍
Well I was just reading this as a backstory for the “do I even have time” story (or whatever it’s called). I didn’t expect to be tearing up at the end
"Miss Amber, a lady never opens a door in front of a gentleman, if she does, she's not a lady. If he doesn't open it for her, she needs to be with someone else because she's not with a gentleman"
I would have punched his lights out.
Great characters and storyline. Very, very good. 5 glad I ran across this one.
Very poignant story, I can understand her her life change after he passed, I feel that every day since my loving wife passed. There is a hole in my life that will never be filled again. Keep on writing, you are very good.
I enjoyed reading the story. Very sentimental, and well written. Thank you.
It may have written in 2006 but, reading it for the first time in 2020, it has a vibrancy which makes it ageless.
I keep reading this one every yearcand Still feel the same thrill of the first day
A wonderful story. Not many bring a few tears but this story did. Thank you!
I've read this story before but it has been years ago. It is still a beautiful story told very well.
Thank you
What I find so wonderful about this site - finding the diamond stories. The stories that evoke such heartfelt responses (tears, laughs, smiles) that can be seen and are felt. A sincere thank you for writing and sharing. If my comment (which I find NO fault with story or characters) and vote is payment required for reading please consider me paid for your skillful story!
Please do keep writing and I will keep reading!
"As the casket was rolled away, her sons were sharing the same thought, 'I know the wood will burn, but I hope the wolf head doesn't melt. It would be so nice centered in the middle of their ashes where mom can continue to hold it, binding dad to her forever."
I think my lovely lady and I will make a change in our final instructions. Thank you for the best story I have read.
To cry. This is a fantasy and a very well written love story. My eyes are full of tears, thank you.
Thanks for this story, love can make all things right. This was a wonderful example of love at work.
She really didn't want an old man. She just used him for his money. What a slut!
Shame on you for making a grown man cry. This is, by far, the best romance story I've read on Lit. Thank you.
Once in a lifetime kind of a Love.. not everyone is so lucky to experience it and keep it.. really loved the story .
...buts seldom finish them off. Thanks for proving that you can finish a story just as well. Thank you for sharing your story with us and I look forward to more.
this is the 1st of 3 in a series written on the theme of wetap. for some unknown reason they are not linked in a box to the right labelled Also In This Series
Wasting Time is next.
The Scrapbook is 3rd.
even better the 2nd time through.
I wish this author would submit more stories.
Anyone have a guess what the username wetapap signifies. It must mean something important to the author since the name of the family residence was wetap, a variation on the username. Unfortunately the author last submitted a story January of 2010, and does not respond to e-mails.
I cannot say how many times I have read and reread this story. It never fails to bring a tear to my eye and has lost none of is power no matter how many times I read it. I would recommend anybody who has any feelings about life to read and enjoy.
It was a pleasure to read this story.
Very well written.
Nicely paced story line.
Great story, well conceived and structured. Had me misty eyed by the end.
I'll say it again, thank you for a wonderful story. It is a real love story about True Love. Yes, thee were some parts I didn't care for but they were incidental to a fine story. Overall this was a great story. Again thank you for your writing.
Thank you for such a spell-weaving story. The changes in pace and emotions are very effective and certainly kept my attention and brought tears to my eyes. I look forward to your next story.
I intensely disliked Richard, right from the beginning. Right from the moment where he decided that a woman so down on her luck, that she would perform sexual favors to survive was unworthy of a meal or his attention in any way. It made him seem like an entitled fuckstick. And he did not redeem himself when he judged the shit out of Amber for getting in bed with that one guy.
A storyline is always nice, this delivered. Cheers for a good read.
and beautiful
I wish we were able to hear the reason for the name Wetap
This is a well crafted story that is an emotional ride from beginning to end. It is a variation on Shaw's Pygmalion.
A well written and crafted story that is an emotional ride to the very end. It is a twist or different approach to Shaw's Pygmalion.
I found this story created emotion in me. To me the sign of a well written story is one that does just that.
lol idk if its because im high but this might be the best romance story ive read on this site
THIS IS MY FIRST TIME TO READ IT BUT NOT THE LAST. SUCH A LOVING STORY BETWEEN TWO PEOPLE NO MAKE THAT ALL THE PEOPLE THAT LIVED AT WETAP. THEY LOVED EACH OTHER TO THE END (RICHARD AND MISS AMBER). I DONT KNOW WHAT ELSE TO SAY EXCEPT I WAS SO MOVED BY THIS STORY.
RON
Everyone else has expressed what I feel about this story. I enjoyed it so much I have read it four times in the last month....and I am seventy three years old. Think about that a minute.
A very well written and heartfelt story. This is the kind of story that can be read and re-read over and over. Thanks, I really enjoyed it.
This is the finest story I have ever had the pleasure to read on Lit. Please write more.
Another story that develops into something other than sex, cheating and lies. If only life could truly be like this story. Don't forget, is is a story, but with love and grace.
I love this story. I cried like a baby. I was very moved. Thank you!
THIS IS THE FIRST STORY, WHO MADE TEARS IN MY EYES........................''
NO WORDS I HAVE TO DESCRIBE...., GREAT STORY I EVER READ '''
THANKS
It's very rare that I give a full 5 stars to a story that doesn't contain any sex per se. In fact, this is the first instance of it happening. This is a great read. I plan on giving some of your other stories a try as time allows.
Rarely have I been so caught up by a master story teller's woven web... Never has a single story made me shut down my computer and live the story again and again, in the dark, sitting on my favorite chair ...knowing that my writing for this day is done.
I wish I could think of something eloquent to say that would do justice to the story, I can't so just thank you for sharing and I truly enjoyed it from start to finish. Thank you.
That was a great story, I read it twice because I enjoyed it so much. Thank you.
Boy did this story pull on my heart strings. Thanks for writing this. Looking forward to reading your other submissions.
Thank you for a wonderful story about a wonderful wife -
This was an excellent story line. The characters were well filled in and understood. I enjoyed it but found her attraction to the cane to be confusing and not very believable. It was out of character and and almost a distraction from the story. Thank you for a great story all the same.