All Comments on 'Birds of a Feather Ch. 04'

by treborkat

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Hotter than hell!

I enjoyed this chapter even more than the previous ones, ticking off the boxes for a lot of my fetishes along the way. And to see their love for each other only growing stronger made my heart soar. Now I can't wait for more and to see just what the boss wamts to speak about.

There are a few mistakes here and there (like "taking hold of her cock"), but it's getting better each time

5*!!!

treborkattreborkatover 7 years agoAuthor
Thank you Anonymous 08-18.

LOL, I can not believe I missed her cock. Thank you for all of your suggestions. The story continues, and I will continue to make every effort to improve

Treborkat.

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