by treborkat
Hotter with each chapter, I genuninely thought that this couldn't get any better yet you managed to up the antee. Including people from work, keeping fingers crossed for the boss and his wife, was already fun and potentially leathal, the inclusion of the sex shop girl and her family was pure sexual bomb! Now the options for debauchery really are limitless.
There are some mistakes persisting, like missing letters or (I assume) wrong avtocorrects. The biggest however is the fouble lines at the drive home scene, might want to check it out.
Stll gave it a 5* for the perv value and happily looking for more soon.