All Comments on 'Birds of a Feather Ch. 06'

OK, hopefully this was all the scat play we'll get to see in this story, time to move on to the more conventional stuff from previous chapters. I do however like the progression of the story and the character development in this chapter, more people for more fun and some serious times for a bright future. It not all about sex so I'm down with more such chapters in the future.

There are however a significant number of errors compared tot he previous instalments, so check into that next time.

A decent 4* this time.

did 'Linda's' name suddenly change to 'Gail'??

PLEASE proof read!

There are loads of miss-spellings, and changes of 'tense' from 'Past' to 'Present' and back again!