All Comments on 'Birth of a Speedster Ch. 01'

Most convoluted story I've read.

The first chapter is usually where the story background and setting is laid out, and the writer grabs the reader's interest.

There really isn't enough here to accomplish either.

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Also; the tag 'spitting' is usually meant to describe the rough sex practice of spitting in your sex partner's face for their degradation, quite different from not swallowing after a blowjob.