All Comments on 'Birthday Cakes and Creampies Ch. 01'

by BouncyBabyGirl

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Wow

Taking advantage of the mentally handicap is wrong

SiddingtonSiddingtonabout 6 years ago

That was fun so can't wait for the next part. I'm hoping their daughter isn't on birth control ;)

dietz10000dietz10000about 6 years ago
Happy Birthday Bouncy

Any time you want to celebrate I'm available

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
so fucking sexy

That was so fucking sexy, I can only imagine you are in fact an 18yr old girl. Everything was spot on. Please do more and please have mommy fuck her with a strapon!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Horrible

Yeah, me thinks someone needs to get an editor.

clitlicker4uclitlicker4uabout 6 years ago
Welcym back Bouncy

Loved the story. If you or any other little girls out there wants to celebrate your birthday, I'd be happy to supply the daddy cock for your teenage cunt

prop69prop69about 6 years ago
CRAP -

I want Daddy to give her a good fucking

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

Painfully Immature! The laughing and comments of Baby Girl made her seem like she was a lot younger than 18. Sad.Ruined the story.

SashaPozaSashaPozaabout 6 years ago
Whew

I write this itch sticky fingers ... Sometimes it fun to pretend you're a character in a story, I just did. Some people won't get this but I sure did!

orlandomorlandomalmost 6 years ago
So Wrong!

So wrong but so hot. Keep going with the story. Daddy & Mommy can teach Baby Girl all kinds of new things.

redwolver111redwolver111over 4 years ago
Something doesn't sound right

Are you sure she's 18? Sounds like a 5 year old to me.

Also, pretty sure the way mommy forced daddy's cock down babygirl's throat without warning, that might be a little illegal, did mommy even ask if babygirl wanted her present? Why risk rape, when mommy could gently teach babygirl what to do. Then mommy could help with the deep throat if asked. It certainly feels like the parents want this more than babygirl.

Rifraff123Rifraff1236 months ago

So taboo............. I loved it.

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Hiya! My name's BouncyBabyGirl, and I'm a 20-something yr old female in a long term poly relationship with my dom couple, Mr. Steel and Jenni Lane. This is my first time writing erotica, and oh boy oh boy, I am having soooo much fun! And from the looks of things...so are YOU...