All Comments on 'Birthday Camping Trip'

Very erotic story. You had me hard wishing for a hot top to make me his boi!

Your story was very well written, don’t be she to continue it or write another.

Well done 😎

You added no unnecessary details. Every word of every sentense adds some meaning. You followed Chekhov's rule, if a gun was left hanging on the wall in Act I, than it must be used in Act IV."

You made it so romantic & nice.

This is a love story & a sex story & a first time story 3-in-1!

I wish i had been seduced & fucked by a friend i trusted when i turned 18.

Erotic--made all the more so, because I've seen pictures of this smooth five foot Stoner Fem Boi on Tumblr, in cute petite panties and bras . . .

That was a hot short story of your encounter with your friend

I just love a hot short story, I wish I was there,

Well done