All Comments on 'Birthday Celebration'

Since even you don't know who the assailant was, I've made up my mind that it was Amanda. A good friend with hidden lesbian desires sounds sexier than a total stranger (and a man with a wig is just a turn-off). The only part that bothered me was how the birthday girl didn't seem to put up any resistance to the unknown interloper. Apparently she was too drunk on lust to care. Anyway, I'm sure many of us would be quite happy if you'd care to make more submissions. Thank you.

Great right up until the ending, which to me was kind of a cop-out. I'd much rather a sequel where the hunt is on!

This was a very well written first submission. I too would have prefered the ending leading to a sequel. However that's just me, and it is your story. This is a very well crafted piece and I look forward to more from you in the (near) future I hope.

A well written story, but like many others, I think a stronger ending would improve the tale.

Keep up the good work.