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Click here"That was a long minute," Amanda said, as I returned to the table. "What you been up to?"
"Nothing," I answered quickly, looking around for Amy. "Where's Amy got to?"
"She went to the bar for something, just after you left," Amanda replied.
"What for?" I asked, eyeing her bottle. She'd only taken a few sips from it, so she hadn't gone to get another drink. I looked over towards the bar, which was so busy I couldn't see anyone at the front of the queue, and then glanced over at the entrance to the ladies. It was only a few feet from the bar, it would have taken Amy only a moment to sneak from there over to the toilets if Amanda hadn't been looking. As I continued to scan that part of the first floor balcony, I caught sight of the young girl in the black, transparent outfit who had been watching me outside. As I watched, she lifted a bottle to her lips and took a mouthful, and I saw that she was wearing what looked like a black handkerchief tied round her wrist. Looking at her other wrist, I saw that it was bare. With a gasp, I opened my bag and looked at the handkerchief that was in there. I couldn't be sure because of the distance between us, but it looked almost exactly the same as the one the girl in black had tied round her wrist.
Who had been my mystery lover for the past half hour, giving me the most intense orgasms I had ever had? Was it a woman, as I suspected, and if so who had it been? One of my closest friends, who had left the table just after me and hadn't yet returned, or the incredibly young looking girl in the see-through outfit who had apparently lost a black velvet handkerchief identical to the one now in my handbag? The incident was almost four years ago, and I still have no idea.
- COMMENTS
kbateover 18 years agoA well written story, but like many others, I think a stronger ending would improve the tale.
Keep up the good work.
Landrious1over 18 years agoThis was a very well written first submission. I too would have prefered the ending leading to a sequel. However that's just me, and it is your story. This is a very well crafted piece and I look forward to more from you in the (near) future I hope.
Anonymousover 18 years agoGreat right up until the ending, which to me was kind of a cop-out. I'd much rather a sequel where the hunt is on!
Anonymousover 18 years agoSince even you don't know who the assailant was, I've made up my mind that it was Amanda. A good friend with hidden lesbian desires sounds sexier than a total stranger (and a man with a wig is just a turn-off). The only part that bothered me was how the birthday girl didn't seem to put up any resistance to the unknown interloper. Apparently she was too drunk on lust to care. Anyway, I'm sure many of us would be quite happy if you'd care to make more submissions. Thank you.
