All Comments on 'Birthday Disaster... or is It?'

Just watch your over use of 'raven haired beauty'. Too much :)

What a really nice story. Any plans for a sequel?

I could offer suggestions, but really, this is a wonderful, slightly cheesy (in a really good wsy), lovely & tender story. It's kinda magical, whimsy at its finest. Wonderful characters with depth & realism to them. Good dialogue. Great detail of feelings & conflicts. Sometimes falling in love is so easy & spectacular & you've captured that. I'm pretty stingy about 5 starring a story but you've earned them from me. Thank you for this story. It lightened my heart & brought me joy. What more could a writer hope for than to touch a reafer's heart & soul? Good job!

I thoroughly enjoyed it, thank you for sharing it with us!