by mind_sex
im lmao when he said he already fucked that guys mom and sister when they was in the room next to his XDXD
Just ignore what people say about your writing just keep doing it as long as it makes you happy keep writing these stories
8 inch, good joke are you compensating for you 3 inch hard-on. Second, where is that rule saying on your 18 th birthday you MUST loose your virginity. Pity this was a easy 5, but you did make it a 1 because of your insecurities.
This just sucks,and not in a good way. You should do the world a favor and not write anymore.
While gramatically sound it was rather unimaginative. Your character was rewarded for being an asshole. Life is too much like that, give us something interesting.
its not rape if its willing. and he swong first got dodged personally i thought it was a good story and hot too cuz ive always liked fucking sisters particularly
I gotta agree with the other comments, dude. You are one lame, untalented mutha. You do realze your story sucks, don't you? You don't actually think you have talent, do you?
What a "STUPID' story. Bet it took you all of a 1/2 hour to write this "GARBAGE".* One of the worst stories I have read on here even though he has a huge private part, all of 2"...LOL
Do us all a favor and don't "try" to write another so called story.*