All Comments on 'Birthday Girl Ch. 03'

Most excellent. Looking forward to more!

Keep the humor and budding romance coming.

Love the way you write.

You have superb skill in capturing wonderful and intimate moments we can all relate to and Melissa sounds absolutely quirky and unique enough to be real. Great job, and well done

Great fun I enjoyed it very much. Exceptional for a first story.

Thanks very much and please keep up the good work.

You've managed to capture the inner conversation all guys have with themselves very well. For a beginner your style is very polished. I look forward to reading more from you hopefully in the very near future.

More please!

I inadvertently clicked on 4 instead of the 5 that I meant to. Anxiously awaiting the next chapter.

I am really enjoying this story. The self talk is much like my own and the humour is keeping a smile on my face except for the times when I am laughing out loud.

Damn, I never thought of doing that; nearly wet myself laughing !