All Comments on 'Birthday in Vegas Pt. 01'

Erotic and tender

This story excites me and I await the next chapter. I cannot wait until the dads get to fuck their own daughters.

Loved the story and plot. Please include nylons in next chapter. Dress up the girls and let them show off their legs on a hot night that ends up sex in clothes proving Dads nylon fetish.

Fun story and very good writing. Thanks!

Surprised that only 3 people (besides me) have commented.

I came back for more. Two beautiful daughters, what Dads would not want.

The storyline was excellent and the characters were believe able.

It was just as good to day as 4 years ago.

Can't wait to reread the last chapter.