All Comments on 'Birthday in Vegas Pt. 02'

Thanks for sharing your fine story!

You couldn't possibly do anything more with this tale or it would be ruined. Best combination of love and lust that I have read on this site ever in over 20 years.

A very well written, and thoroughly enjoyable story. Keep up the good work.

Tenderness and pleasure. Loving and tenderness as well as the incest.

There are two things you've left unexplored with this story. The girls have sex with each other. And both girls have fucked both fathers. I would like to see an orgy scene, where both couples play together! Finally, any chance of Bruce and Mike getting together, the way their daughters do, and their wives used to? Why not? Consider the possibilities.

are you going to continue with the story , a year or two inthe future to see how the relationships evolve. great story....

A group holiday/vacation story would be nice where the 2 girls swap over again but all 4 are in the same room.

I think only having one switching fathers was best. They were not switching for sex with the other father. They were switching to cross the bounds with their own fathers. They new neither father would make love with their daughter because they respected them and were concerned about incest. However, once the father made love with the other daughter they were open to have sex with the father again. This allowed the girls to "sneak" into the father's bed. Now each father and daughter could express their HIDDEN FEELINGS, a BEAUTIFUL EXPRESSION of LOVE. Great read