All Comments on 'Birthday Photos'

I really love this story. Definite 5 stars. Really sexy without being too smutty. Not only did it get me wet, it also left my breathing pretty ragged.

Super sexy story! But a lot of the writing needs editing please! Many sentences don't make sense, things happen to the characters that there was no setup for, etc. would be fantastic if it was cleaned up a bit.

Lovely simple story, I bet that happens a lot, I might get one done for my boyfriend.