by AnonymousPerv
For a quick story written at a single sitting this is remarkable. Kudos and stars all around. JB
It's a pity it seems to be just a short story, it could use some more chapters. 5*****
I wasn't really into this at first, but it had a happy ending. Great story, thank you.
Great little story, this is just the sort of thing I enjoy a lot. My only criticism would be, maybe you don't need to prevaricate about the appearance of women who are a little older or less than perfect? Just say they're hot without the "in spite of."
Still giving five stars though.
Fantastic story. Brought up the idea, and executed it flawlessly. Ignore TheMadHatter52 and mammoet. The idea has been fully fleshed out and the story has peaked. Trying to prologue this would require either an entirely new idea, or it will just be a mediocre drag.