All Comments on 'Birthday Suits in the Office'

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JBEdwardsJBEdwardsalmost 6 years ago
Great

For a quick story written at a single sitting this is remarkable. Kudos and stars all around. JB

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
raise

Felicity deserves a raise!

Bob150BobBob150Bobalmost 6 years ago
Love ❤️ it!!

All naked women are great!!

Thanks.

Bob

mammoetmammoetalmost 6 years ago
great story

It's a pity it seems to be just a short story, it could use some more chapters. 5*****

ZZchromosomeZZchromosomealmost 6 years ago

I wasn't really into this at first, but it had a happy ending. Great story, thank you.

autoplotautoplotalmost 6 years ago

Great little story, this is just the sort of thing I enjoy a lot. My only criticism would be, maybe you don't need to prevaricate about the appearance of women who are a little older or less than perfect? Just say they're hot without the "in spite of."

Still giving five stars though.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

East read. Another chapter?

TheMadHatter52TheMadHatter52over 5 years ago
Sequel?

Any chance we'll ever see a sequel to this?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Fantastic story. Brought up the idea, and executed it flawlessly. Ignore TheMadHatter52 and mammoet. The idea has been fully fleshed out and the story has peaked. Trying to prologue this would require either an entirely new idea, or it will just be a mediocre drag.

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Writer of mostly oddball comedy and ridiculous situations. I've also written other stuff that actually paid the bills.