All Comments on 'Birthday Surprise'

cant wait to read more of this loving couples adventures, sounds like a great night ahead for them all :)

What happened? I barley got started reading and it was done not good. You could have made this into a great story adding spice to the dancing and the dinner table antics etc. Try again with the idea and lengthen it a lot. It really was a great start.

Great writing. Keep going!!!