All Comments on 'Birthday Surprise'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Shear is what you do to sheep.

Sheer is sexy clothing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Nice story!

Good narrative - next night, more waitress engagement...

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Nice fantasy

I like this author. Great stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

I like your stories. They're fun!

jimliteroticajimliteroticaabout 10 years ago
This is kind of

Story I enjoy reading. This got me aroused real good.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Only thing better,would be wife show waitress cunt!

EasypeterEasypeterabout 6 years ago
Erotic story

Lingerie is fun on anyone. Pearls are my favorite thing on my wife if she has on hose and heels with garters. They lay in her cleavage so well.

StubbyoneStubbyoneabout 4 years ago
Beautiful !

Just beautiful ! Such a loving wife. Not a "loving wife" story per se, but sexy and erotic in its own right. Your description of their "play" in the restaurant was so much fun. Something that I would or could have done, having had the right partner. This story is so well written. The interplay with the waitress was a nice addition and added a touch of adventure and naughtiness to the already steamy sex play of the couple. I loved it. Well done. An easy 5😊😊😊😊😊. Thanks for sharing what's in your very fertile mind.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Well done

Well written and I agree with the previous comment. Getting the waitress involved added to the story. I enjoyed! Keep writing. 5 stars!L6b5G

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