All Comments on 'Birthday Surprise'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Now that's a thoughtful husband!

Very thought provoking and erotic. I can hardly wait to see how the girls react when Audrey introduces them to Rex. I'll bet they're going to want a Rex of their own...I do.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Great Story!

Nicely done! Well-written, entertaining, erotic...........what more could a reader ask? I sure hope there is going to be a sequel. I believe I'll take a look at other stories written by this author.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
I'm still breathing hard..............

What a story! God I hope there are sequels!

5*

Wish I could give it a 6!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Bravo!

Beautifully written. Well done. More please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Well done!

Unique in every way and very arousing. From the ending, I assume there will be a sequel. Don't make me wait too long.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Wow!

Saw your lead-in to Ladies' Night so I read this one first. This story is highly entertaining, very well-written, and VERY erotic. I hope Ladies' Night is half as good. Five Stars for this one!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Excellent!

The android thing has been done before, but this is fresh approach. Very erotic too. I really like the way you have portrayed Audrey's and Eric's relationship.

larson67larson67about 10 years ago
Love it

Loved the story and this whole idea. Could you write one where Audrey is DP'd by Rex and her husband. That would be amazing! Keep it ip.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Wonderful!

Best android/robot sex story I've ever read!

rightbankrightbankabout 10 years ago
Actually I found it

rather mechanical.

The limitations listed should make this a non starter and too restrictive for most women.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
sorry but sex is not satisfiying when

" what Rex cannot do. He has no concept of fondling, kissing, foreplay, or cunnilingus".

And he spends all his time holding himself up and out of the way of physical contact during the pounding.

So much for pleasure. Everything went downhill from there.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Great Story!

Love the closeness between Audrey and Eric. They truly love each other. And Rex is the perfect sex toy. I want one!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
I want one....

I'm going to make my husband read this. It may take a few years for something like this to become reality, but I want him to be ready when it happens. I know I will be.

bearsladybearsladyover 9 years ago
hot damn!

I want one! Absolutely no different than a vibrator except you don't have to hold it. If I have sex or make love, I turn to my husband. If he's gone, Rex would be perfect. He would be used like Audrey will use him, as an adjunct, not a replacement. Put in my order now. LOL

Now for the story, nicely done. 5+

yesmasteriwillyesmasteriwillover 9 years ago
Wow!

I'd pay a tremendous amout of money for a Rex of my own!

rayironrayironalmost 7 years ago
Cute!

Clank...beeeeep.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Unbelievably good

Imagination of idea and plot.

Wondrous ability to transfer the concept to words for us readers.

You are in the top echelon of authors on Literotica.

Thanks.

Paul in Oklahoma

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
5*

Awesome!

theMasterBaitertheMasterBaiterabout 6 years ago
Fun.

Enjoyable story. I liked that you differentiated between the type of love / sex that a human can provide without shorting the advantages of a robot. It was a very balanced, fair, and I think accurate presentation.

Sadly, in real life, many humans anthropomorphize sex robots. They pretend they are real and develop "relationships" with them. The prime mfgr or sex bots in America happens to be just down the road and they are hard at work on a model that can talk for exactly that reason. Having a "robobitch" that will tell their owner they love them is (seriously) a huge selling point. That doesn't seem like good mental health to me. Your presentation showed a far healthier use of a sex bot, in my opinion.

Minor nit: The car would have just parked itself. No need for a digital valet.

All in all, a really good story and a well thought out approach to sex bots. I hope you will write a sequel were the women discuss all the pro's and con's of owning a sex bot. And perhaps another where a lonely man buys a sex bot and struggles with his "relationship" to her.

olblueyesolblueyesalmost 4 years ago

a little less 'splaining and a little more action please,,especially when Audrey mentioned showing rex to the girls.

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