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Typos aside, you write well. The sex scenes-at least with Marco-were described better than sex actually is! But the gangbang is disturbing. It is a rape, rape is never okay, it is not sexy or erotic. It’s about control and dominance. It’s violent and ugly and I know that very young boys read this. If this story makes even one believe rape is anything less than a straight ticket to the lockup and after that, Hell than you have done a miservice. Go to rape crisis. If you can find one woman that enjoyed it. Leave it. But this is dark fantasy, bad fiction. Put your main characters on a new type of story. But kill this one. It’s infection.

Disturbing that rape & eroticism can be equated by some authors. Rape is a criminal enterprise with life-long repercussions for the raped [woman or man]. Consequences are often akin to PTSD. Not worth reading.