All Comments on 'Birthday Surprise'

I like the storyline, lots of tease, wife will come around, I'd love to eat her. Xoxoxoxo Annette

is nice, is there a naughty ending? lots of teasing, good story line, flowed well, not too much, not too little,,just right,

Good story. Your characters were believable and the story ended in a realistic way.The wife did not turn into a sex machine and had a gang-bang with all males on the beach. Too many wife stories are over done with the "she turned into a super slut and hubby is a very happy man". This story angle is poor and boring ! Thank for a "real" touch to your stories . Keep it up.

The wife was okay with her 61 yr manwhore husband fucking the skank Jen.....he made her a cuck twice!!

This could have been a good erotic story between a husband and wife enjoying themselves on his birthday, but no - the author goes for the cheap, easy way instead, introducing an obnoxiously rude pair of perverted slobs who just HAD to interfere with 2 people enjoying themselves. Went from 5 stars to 1 star really fast. This story is listed under Erotic Couplings, not Non-Consent/Reluctance or Loving Wives (which is a funny name for what goes on in those stories - still, we all know what it means).

All the talk about loving his wife in the beginning of the story, but he acts otherwise the first chance he gets!