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All Comments on 'Birthday Surprise'

by ALpelosi

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Jonny_BluelineJonny_Bluelineover 6 years ago
Liked the Twist

It's a good quick and dirty story but could have been a little longer and more descriptive. You nicely left it open for a sequel too.

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