All Comments on 'Birthday Surprise'

This is perhaps the sexiest love story I've read on this sight. Keep up the good work.

Great read, if you continue this story I'd definitely read, because you can definitely expand on both characters and make a much longer story. Explore his upbringing, explore her isolation, and show her "friends" reactions. Great story.

good concept, good start to a story. Nice fuck scenes. Dialouge seems hokey and drops a star - people don't talk like that - "Littke Rose?"

Wonderful story