All Comments on 'Birthday Trip Ch. 01'

Not a bad story, but you need help with your writing.

moms is now prego

WAY TO SHORT!!!!

Nice story seems based on real situation. Keep writing, you have good imagination

Loved the story! Please keep them coming with more ways to hide their new game from Dad!

Love that story, but it was way to short.

While on vacaion she gets used to having her son's cock in her pussy, and when they get home she takes advanage of having a young hard and willing cock to give her pleasure as much as she can get to be alone with him.

Thanks for the read

awesome story, my own dick got hard reading it, well done, can't wait for the next edition

its very erotic story..

Nice... welcome back! Hot story. Love the sitting on lap theme.

I hope so

I was really enjoying this until we got to the tank top and hot pants which seem to be compulsory wear for American Mothers but are only worn by under 16's in the UK. Good story but similar to ones i have read where the action takes place in a car. Enjoyed it though.

This story begs the question, when will there be a Part II?

Very hot and nice!!! We 're waiting for the next part... ;-)

soooooooo hot awesome story

I have a feeling this is an honest story with an honest experience. Well told!

While I enjoyed the story, I wished that you included some physical description of the characters, especially the mother. Is she tall or short or medium height? Is she voluptuous or slim? Dark hair or blonde? Has wrinkles, sagging boobs, thick thighs, or athletic and looks much younger than her years? Is she busty or modestly endowed? These little things that makes a good story (which this is) into a great one. Think about it. And I hope that you continue further with this story-line. Thanks.

While I enjoyed the story, I wished that you included some physical description of the characters, especially the mother. Is she tall or short or medium height? Is she voluptuous or slim? Dark hair or blonde? Has wrinkles, sagging boobs, thick thighs, or athletic and looks much younger than her years? Is she busty or modestly endowed? These little things that makes a good story (which this is) into a great one. Think about it. And I hope that you continue further with this story-line. Thanks.

First off you left out all the details about mom, except her age (41) And dad (46). also you forgot yourself.Tell us how big you are, it must be a whopper. To make it out of the leg of your shorts and full into mom. I can't wait for chapter 02: .. ....................................LAROC OF AGES

Having read quite a few of these fantasy tales of a mom sitting on their son's lap, this situation was the least absurd of them so far. What a shame it's just too short and hurried without giving us proper character details first. Maybe the next chapter will save it.

Need more like this or more chapters on this trip

great

Great!!

Losing my virginity on my 18th birthday like this would be mind fuckingly awesome. Nice story. I like to get on these mom sitting on son's lap type stories.

I grew up watching Mom's ass cheeks jiggling beneath a pair of skimpy panties and tshirt that she wore around the house all the time. I've always wanted to grab both of her big fat ass cheeks and squeeze! I loved when I could see her hairy bush poking out around the edges or when her nipples were hard and showing. i'll always fantasize about shoving my dick into Mom's ass cheeks, through her dense patch of pussy hair and up to her thin waist line, so deep inside her where I could pump my load of cum directly into her body.

this story has originality, outdoor scenes instead of the eternal bedroom ones, sex technic and overall a tone of thruth. Thank you _a_friend_ (spike)

Congrats ;)

One commenter wrote that this story was similar to one he'd read before. With the thousands of stories on this web site, that's going to happen. No use worrying about it. I've been reading the incest taboo stories on this site for several years and there are many thousands more stories in that category.

The old fart

Remind me of the early ialwaywantedto stories keep it up we need someone to fill in for him since he left.

Good take on this theme. Always interested in a new approach.

didn't read entire thing only did literally read bits&pieces here+there ...... i'm gonna

do the same thing other stories this franchise ...... i'll read everything when

i'm able reading everything ...................... absolutely fantastic absolutely awesome

absolutely sensational absolutely phenomenal - from what i've did literally read

I liked the story. As others have said, this shouldn't end here. There is a whole vacation left to experience,

Good read

A marginal story that could be developed but it needs to be expanded. How did they rationalize what they did. You really needed at least one more chapter or so to make a complete story,

You did an awesome job! One of the types of stories that turn me on the most is mom's lap stories and yours was very good! I'll leave the "room for improvement" comments to someone else, I'll just say that my cock was hard as a rock and I can't wait to get to the next installment of your mom and son story!

This is a very good story. Good use of the English language. The plot is logically developed. As a romantic, itis a shame that mother and son were not able to communicate via language. The mother knows she has the respect and unconditional love of her son. The son know his mother loves him unconditionally. A mutually consenual incestuous relationship is one in which there is no positional powerplay; no fear of emotional abandonment, nor fear of emotional or physical abuse. From the interaction of mother/son, this relationship appears to be one of mutual consent.

A very fun and sexy story. Looking forward to the next part.

Learn English. If English is your native language, please don't have children. If you're a typical Generation X, the world is fucked.

Good read I love mom's lap stories