All Comments on 'Bisexual Men's Universe'

I enjoy reading your subject matter as well as your concern with mens issues. But there seems to be a common problem with a good portion of your story telling...certain phrases tend to be over used and repeated. If you cut down on this the story will have a more genuine feel to it and it will flow much better.

With that being said, I believe, over time, you're going to become an accomplished writer of erotica and I will continue reading your material.

Good Luck!

Bi Bi Bill