All Comments on 'Bishop Takes Knight Ch. 04'

Hi, you write a "tour-de-force'" of sexual excess and you do it well. Again, I think a bit more detail than needed and perhaps a lot more sexual explosions than most could manage, but enjoyable and stimulating. Jeanne

Great story with just right amount of intrigue to keep the reader really tuned in. Love your style. Xoxoxoxoxo Annette

Each chapter is hotter than the last and leaves me wanting more....keep going!

Please learn the difference between discrete and discreet.

A work of erotic artwork again x x x

Your mind is deliciously filthy and classy in almost equal measure LOL.

I have no idea how you would even start a piece of work like this...those of you who write fiction are simply awesome, talented and obviously horny a hell of a lot of the time LOL x x x

As usual, I see we have we have the anonymous cretins who bitch and moan about punctuation or simple spell check errors, or even worse the religious nutters who come to adult sites and find it all terribly rude...Why the fuck do you lot bother??

Why not just bugger off, go and find an online bingo, gaming or 'praise the lord' site and stop reading stuff you find offensive?? So what if one word or phrase is missed??

I am in awe of your writing skills! I do believe that you could make a living at writing erotic stories! You are that good! Keep up the good work and WE WANT MORE GREAT STORIES LIKE THIS! Make me so hot!

Well...I thought I had heard of everything but I love this expression! I will steal it someday,