All Comments on 'Bishop's Red Light Romp Ch. 01'

by FOUNTAINPEN67

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redkissyredkissyover 6 years ago
5*

Love your work! Keep them coming!

Brittni4uBrittni4uover 6 years ago
Great Work

5 stars from me...very authentic....love your work...kisses...Britt

daylilygardenerdaylilygardenerover 6 years ago
Great

Well written and erotic. Super hot ladies.

Skye_subSkye_subover 6 years ago
Brilliant writing

Your writing is so lyrical and rhythmic it lulls one to orgasm like the filthiest nursery rhyme ever told. Cheers. Five stars!

AnnetteBishopAnnetteBishopover 6 years ago
Great effort

I admit I'm a wee bit prejudicedregarding the storyline; that said the writing is exceptional. Foutainpen draws the reader in to the action and causes me to yearn for more. I hope you enjoy it as much as I am. Xoxoxoxo Annette

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
BEST YET

You have managed to improve what didn't need improving, your writing! This story reads as a professional offering...complex character development followed by hot sex! Would like to see more of Amanda, lol!

FIVE STARS⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Brilliant

Brilliant writing and showing wonderful imagination. Many women will get very excited reading this.

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Hello everyone... with spring I have several new projects I am completing and a few more in the works. You'll see I am dabbling in short stories like The Chair; Our Stage and Private Box but I also have a few longies in the works. I'm working on chapter four of Lusty Lynn-Sexy...