All Comments on 'BitchBoy'

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CurvyPisces23CurvyPisces23about 9 years ago
I want more!!!

I can't wait for more of this story. It's exactly what I've been waiting for and didn't even know it. My only complaint is that it needs to be longer but I love the pacing and danger of it all. I like how she is seems to be comfortable with her body and sexuality, represent for the big girls I love it. Give just a little more detail about how the main characters look even though I liked the subtle way you gave certain characteristics. Waiting for your next update. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Interesting

Seems "BitchBoy" is the dom so far. Mind tricks being played on Claire?

kuk4yookuk4yooabout 9 years ago
What's going on here?

While there are some exciting elements, i'm having a hard time seeing how a supposed 'submissive' acts so dominant. And is Claire confused? Is she dominant, submissive, or 'switch'? Being played? Or is the author in doubt?

Will we find out? i'll tune in...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Interesting

It's interesting so far

KhamalaniKhamalaniabout 9 years ago

Curiouser and curiouser.

Friend2PinFriend2Pinabout 9 years ago
I think I get it...

Claire is submissive by nature, and "fuckboy 2.0" is dominant by nature, yet wants to be dominated. So why not be dominated by someone you're attracted to, and who is attracted to you. Am I right? Anyway, I enjoyed the first chapter and looking forward for more 5*'s

sexylilthingsexylilthingabout 8 years ago
I love it

I totally get this story. Fuckboy 2 is dominant by nature, so wants to be dominated. He and Claire hate each, but are turned on by each other, so she's the perfect choice. She now has to step up to the mark and dominate the fucking out of him!

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