by unpublaauthor
WOW !!
Unpub really knows what she is doing. Working away like a master sculptor she turned a rough piece of stone into a piece of utter beauty !! Just a lil chip here n a lil there n lo n behold you have a masterpiece.
Goes to show what a master craftsman can do when she is gifted with such uncanny skills.
This surely is a prize winning beauty !
Great story Pubs! You definitely have a way with words. I look forward to reading the rest of your works. You are very talented indeed!
I liked it, but felt like Bitsy didn't resist enough and easily gave in. Had there been a bit of struggle on her side, it would've seemed more real.
You really know how to use words, lady. I am mesmerized. Took me a while to find your stories. You inspired me to do better. Will read more later. You are amazing. Your comment means so much more to me now that i know it comes frm an experienced and Awesome writer.
Loved it, just as I like my porn, plenty of body fluids, sheer dominance with withheld submission well done