All Comments on 'Bitsy's Inhuman Submission Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
ejaculation.

wow ...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
High quality writing !!

WOW !!

Unpub really knows what she is doing. Working away like a master sculptor she turned a rough piece of stone into a piece of utter beauty !! Just a lil chip here n a lil there n lo n behold you have a masterpiece.

Goes to show what a master craftsman can do when she is gifted with such uncanny skills.

This surely is a prize winning beauty !

labyrinth59labyrinth59over 13 years ago
imaginative

Love this story

athanosathanosabout 9 years ago

Great story Pubs! You definitely have a way with words. I look forward to reading the rest of your works. You are very talented indeed!

McSteamy7McSteamy7almost 9 years ago
Good work, you indeed are good with words.

I liked it, but felt like Bitsy didn't resist enough and easily gave in. Had there been a bit of struggle on her side, it would've seemed more real.

chixjinxbdsmchixjinxbdsmover 8 years ago
wow.

You really know how to use words, lady. I am mesmerized. Took me a while to find your stories. You inspired me to do better. Will read more later. You are amazing. Your comment means so much more to me now that i know it comes frm an experienced and Awesome writer.

Midnight_Talker_xxxMidnight_Talker_xxxalmost 7 years ago
meaty porn

Loved it, just as I like my porn, plenty of body fluids, sheer dominance with withheld submission well done

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
FYI - Category

If it’s not consensual then it’s not BDSM.

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Are character redemption arcs even possible? Stay tuned to find out in the Hades and Persephone spinoff. And see what happens to the Maenads!

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