All Comments on 'Bitsy's Inhuman Submission Ch. 11'

I think your use of the word virago is misplaced as it refers to (and this is a copied and pasted definition) "a domineering, violent, or bad-tempered woman.

"that virago of a wife of his needs locking up"

synonyms: harridan, shrew, dragon, termagant, vixen.

archaic

a woman of masculine strength or spirit; a female warrior."

Please don't take my critisim the wrong way I'm really happy you have returned.

Keep going! It gets better as you go. If I were to make a suggestion it would be add more depth to your sex scenes. They have a beginning and an end. You need more middle. Can't wait to next chapter! Please don't leave us hanging, or quit!