All Comments on 'Bitten Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Please let Damien do Lina

Please let Damien end up with Lina. Surely if vampire blood can heal perhaps semen can to "internally" I'd love to see the scene between them through to completion. As it was meant to be :) thanks and great job

DecadentdessertDecadentdessertalmost 11 years ago

@ anonoyms I believe you may hit on a solution. Vamp blood used internally to eliminate the scarring just as it had on her back. I sure Daimon would volunteer to monitor and test the progress of her therapy.

spearishspearishover 10 years ago
So much better

Brilliant chapter ....just loving the Damion /Lina romance .I will say its ALL extremely well written.Great phrasing ect

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
<3

Love this story. Do you have an update on when to expect the next chapter? <3

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