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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Wow!

Now that's a twist. I really liked how you unpeeled the Major Domo's loyalties. The ending was completely unexpected, and made me read back for the foreshadowings. Really well done.

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Former SR71 pilot, currently professional writer and book editor; writes under name "habu" on other erotica sites. My erotica books can be found under the author name habu or Dirk Hessian (and coauthored books with Sabb under the names Shabbu or Stephen Kessel) at S...