All Comments on 'Bizarre Roommates Ch. 01'

Nice work! The mysterious powers of Ryu are interesting too! Good read! Keep em coming!..

Is Ryu a weredragon? that would be novel.

Is this meant to be over the top silly manga-like story? If so I suppose you're doing well enough. The characters appear to do stupid things, have shallow prejudices, ridicules names, effectively ignore things they claim are important and personality growth from trivial events.

I think I'll keep reading, 10 chapters to go.

Thanks. I've been looking for a less human centric term to replace "nonhuman" for over a year.

That is the only thing which can explain your strange sentence formations. It makes reading your work a real challenge. I suggest you find somone to edit for you.

If you ARE a native English speaker, good luck. You're going to have some challenges, yourself, if you don't learn correct syntax.