All Comments on 'BJ Bliss Ch. 09 Head-to-Head'

We're gonna need a bigger throat. That is one the greatest lines in erotica! 5* for that alone.

I'm sitting here, still laughing. I can't stop.

"If she chokes, she chokes."

LOL! It's almost as if you wrote this chapter just for me! You have no idea how perfect it is. Something tells me that if we knew each other in real life, we'd be the best of friends.

Anyway, this story continues to draw me in like a moth to a flame. It has everything you'd ever want in a story: sexiness, humor, intrigue, a fast-paced and engaging plot, etc., etc.. You have created such likable and well-developed characters that it's impossible not to care what happens to each and every one of them.

This entire series should be made into an HBO series. Seriously. It would be a HUGE hit!

I look forward to the competition. If you could work in a sly reference to one of my characters, it would be the ultimate Christmas present. :)

Signed,

Your #1 Fan

The final chapter is loaded with them! Not to mention more shameless movie references. Thanks for all of the support, swingerjoe, I've been waiting to unleash that classic line from one of the best movies ever! Jed11 thanks for the support as well, I hope you follow through to the next chapter were we will find out if they do in fact need a bigger throat. The writing process is much more enjoyable knowing that you have fans who will actually read the thing!

Margarita is fully aware of the holiday deadline, so I hope that we can deliver on time. This time next week we'll be sipping rum cocktails on a faraway private beach and I'll secretly be wondering "how is Ch. 10 doing?"

As well as a great story that has to be the best final line EVER!

Thanks! :-)