All Comments on 'Black Boots'

Lass she should have devoured him!

It was great until the sex scene!

Then vanila!

Send them to me before you submit!

Sorry love!

You Know who!

This was obviously written from the point of view of a shy, inexperienced girl so why would she devour him. She's only just discovering her sexuality and the effect it is going to have on the men around her. Now she knows what power she has! It was a great read - very believable and, in my opinion, needed no outside editing.

Best sister brother story I ever read. Great V!

Great hot story. Led up to the sex with a masterclass of writing and the sex scene was just as good. Great story

This is my favourite sort of erotic story. The characters were believable, and it was full of conflict, perverse desires and the breaking point between innocence and corruption.

Thank you.

and a terrific build up that had me on the edge of my wet seat. Thanks.

Well I have a thing for women in thigh high black boots, so this story REALLY rang my bell!!! now all i need to do is find some nubile young female discovering her sexuality..... oh, I'm too old for that DAMN! good story!

I loved the story, but please follow it up. Maybe in the next story she can devour him up.

absolutely brilliant

Not my brand of kink, but I thought it was really hot.

Please have more of them.

I hope there's a follow-up.. am really interested in knowing what happened to them after the intercourse.

needed more details after the ending but a good start for future stories

What the fuck? The story ends there and we're left hanging?! Argh! Dammit! :(

I love it, requires a sequel

just in case it isn´t a typo, ¨the course fabric of his clothing¨... rough fabric is coarse, not course.