All Comments on 'Black-Eyed'

I thought the story was well written and the different angle to have a child vampire and obviously the main character knows something about him was neat. I hope you will write more chapters.

This was quite atmospheric and a fair bit scary. (some people are scared of clowns, I just get the chills from freaky kids!) It feels like just the beginning of something tho. What's Sue going to do for money? She can't hide in the house forever, and presumably the vampire child can't come in without an invite. What will they do? I'm very curious now...

Altogether a good start. Hopefully it's not the last of this tale.