All Comments on 'Black Man One Ch. 11'

Great story!

Thanks for continuing.

please continue!!!75AD

Can't wait for more.

Man, white people and black people must really hate each other in america

let him tattoo julie, then shave her pussy. Make her get corn rows in her hair and then an undercut hairstyle like rihanna.

One black man and three of his friends having all night sex with Julie and the other white women that live at the condo.

Love that your wife was wearing the black dress and pantyhose for him. That was very sexy. Please keep it coming. great story!!!

Does it really take 11 chapters to get to this point. This is the worst garbage on the site

Hott! need to know what happened on the date and what goes down next,.

I like where this is going, I just wish it would be faster. I agree it has taken way too long to get here.

Why do you repeat stuff over and over? This story would be way hotter if you sped it up. We understand that the guy is young black and short and the other is taller older white and wimpy.

The build-up has been great, the slow development of the story does add to it being erotic, but it also does have the writer painting himself into a corner. Example the woman from Ch 11, she couldn't have waited 7 hours and leave her 2 year old son alone. While that is a corner the writer has painted himself into, it does give a tantalizing view of the future for Richard.He's probably going to "find out" that the woman in the lavender skirt from Ch 11 is married.

Great story. Very enjoyable.

Just curious to know if you're still writing new stories, along these lines, or if you hung it up? I found Black Man One very good, and exhilarating. Thanks