Black Man One Ch. 23

I love you submissions..... Truly Amazing .....All i pray is that you dont stop .....keep going on

Love that idea just below.

The shaving one is really arousing to see in a d or photos especially when the girl is unable to move but not sure that in a story at this stage will be erotic to imagine, might be proved wrong.

One thing I did imagine 3 or 4 chapters ago which I thought might happen as a few of my previous thoughts materialised, was that the husbands were made to perform as waiters at a pool party in cages and lil brief thongs mimicking Treys as the wives got friendly with all the male invitees be they fellow workers or special guests. As a bonus the boys were made to write secretly the name of the wife who each felt should spend the night with the special guest and Trey would select one from a pot and read it out to cheers and makes the lucky hubby take her by the hand lead her to the lucky man and present her to him. As she stands facing the winner the husband would be forced to stand behind her and release her bikini to even more whoops and cheers. She and the winner then go off together. This would of course have the added bonus (to trey) of breaking up trust between the wimps.

To the guy who wants to see her head shaved, I have to respectfully disagree. Personally, I don't find bald women to be erotic at all. No offense to the guy who suggested it. To each his own. But I've got to cast my vote against it.

However, I do agree with the guy who would like to see more sex. I enjoy the humiliation and submission aspect (especially the white women's submission to the black men), but I would really like to see some action to balance it out.

Also, I'd really like to see a scene depicting Julie's acceptance of Trey's other conquests. Possibly having Richard called over to Trey's only to find Julie cleaning his apartment or washing his dishes in nothing but panties and high heels, while he's in the bedroom enjoying a couple of other women. When Trey finishes, he could come out, have Julie kneel down and clean off his cock, then attend to whatever business he has with Richard. Perhaps he could have been called over to return his washed clothing or something... Just a thought.

Like mentioned in an earlier comment, it would be nice to see his wife get shaved and fucked in a black barber shop. A domineering black woman could wax her pussy too.

Please give us the next chapter quickly. I really like this whole series.

I also look forward to the wife having some sex with the husband.

I kind of like the story. The sense of Tramon overwhelming masculinity is appealing, But the utter lack of sex action is making the story a painful tease. I recongnize that the authors fetish is feeling emasculated and humilated, and the black guy has been built up to project maximum dominance, but I am sorry that reading an entire chapter about one guy dominating 9 guys into investing into a business donation is not erotic, regardless of the different skin color or how degrading he speak to them.

Please give us some sex.