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Anonymousalmost 7 years agotoo many mistakes
the premise was hot but way too many mistakes in grammar,spelling, tense to keep me interested. try proofreading it.
Mymantoy999almost 7 years agoI agree
I usually dismiss the "grammar police" because this is a place for non-writers (like myself) to post stories for entertainment of others. But this one was a very hard read. Great premise though.
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