All Comments on 'Black Orchid Ch. 02'

by anubiis

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BUICK GSBUICK GSover 19 years ago
OK TALK ABOUT A PLOT TWIST

WELL WAS LOOKING FOWARD TO MOM AND YOU TURNED A CORNER WITHOUT MISSING A BEAT. I LIKE YOUR STYLE OF STORY TELLING. IT IS HARD TO TELL A STORY AS THOUGH IT IS PAST EXPERIENCE, BUT YOU DO IT WELL. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK AND KEEP THIS STORY GOING.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Off the chain, need I say more

We need more black erotic stories on this site. This was off the meter and I can't wait to read more bout you and moms and others. I would like to see you write some slut wife stories too since you got madd skills, you know some sneaky on the verge of getting caught, just plain wicked tales. You are my new erotic story writer hero.

From your biggest fan. ONE

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
got damn thats a good story man

gotta love a story as hot as that.....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Borring

Another stupid story leaving us hanging....

Did he or didn't he fuck his mom?

Signed

Stupid Niger

OlebillOlebillabout 8 years ago
stmarted

Started well but then again got fucked up by adding other people in a new beginning for sibling affairs. When will people that write these stories learn and take the feelings of the people this is suppose to be about their brains.

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