All Comments on 'Black Rose Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Freaking Great.

Please keep going. Seriously loved the 2 first parts of this story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Awesome

Agree with the first comment, love both stories and can't wait for the third!!Keep it up

manyeyedhydramanyeyedhydraabout 16 years ago
Good Stuff!

I always like to see a deliciously evil succubus in action. Look forward to seeing what tricks she gets up to.

DenkkarDenkkarover 15 years ago
Woah, what happens next?

This is a fine tale, rather one-sided, but it's got possibilities. I can just imagine the next step: Black Rose stepping into the human world with the apprentice in tow to humiliate him in front of the order of slayers...

AphroditesBelovedAphroditesBelovedover 15 years ago
Lucia rules! hehe

she should break all the slayers and make them her own slaves hehe!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Amazing

I really enjoyed it, i really can't wait for chapter 03

YshomatsuYshomatsuover 11 years ago

Finish this great story!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

please finish this it is amazing

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Finish the story!

Finish it please!!!

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