by subwryter
So this is interesting and I can’t wait to read the full story. I don’t know of any woman white, black, red or yellow who would place themselves in a situation as risky as this. None. To many variables as well as the unknown and with multiple partners. Uh uh. Smokers are a turn off so I would’ve left at that point. Yellowed teeth, potbelly I mean girl do you really want us to believe she was attracted to him. Just knowing there was a secret society of this “black auction” would turn my stomach. She can’t be this eager to find out what really goes on with some sicko people.
One does not write "Little did I know all that I would have to go through?" You would not say this, therefore do not write it.
You say its a white man who is master. But you asked her how she liked your black cock? Wtf?
All over the world whites were slaves more then blacks. Learn history
seem to make good slaves everywhere around the world. Even other blacks prefer them.
It's an okay story but I RESENT that comment! There is no difference between Caucasians and African Amarican men, women, or children!!! I am white and I know that we are all human! Geez! Racist!!!
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It is always a good story that shows a black woman in her proper place
Pretty good opener - maybe do some more editing. Story proceeded too quickly into the auction itself - maybe some undercover entry background development might have added to the erotic buildup. Overall nice work - look forward to the following chapter(s).
Good story starter but can the men be alittle bit sexier. Thx for the story. Plz keep writing
Look forward to more
i want to go to the auction and buyme a black bull
Never mind the perfectionists, its got the makings of a great story! More please
I was thinking the same thing. She is so eager to get her story that she didn't come up with a plan B. With the way her body reaccted with yellow teethed guy I wonder if she will come to like being a slave.
why does a white guy have a black dick? why would she go there with no backup?