All Comments on 'Black Slave Auction Ch. 02'

I'm sure you are going to get some low scores from people who hate this story. I understand that, but I'm giving you a five. Not because I love the story, or even like it, necessarily, but because it deserves a high score.

When I read this, I thought of how many times in the past something like this probably happened almost exactly this way, including the mixed feelings, even if it's only something you're imagining happening now.

Not quite perfectly written, but perfectly effective.

I Liked it very much, I didnt think there was anything wrong with the way you wrote it, its a part of developing your writing and so keep up the good work and I look forward to the next chapter!

I think its an interesting subject as it reflects on past and present issues as well as ownership, we as human beings have a huge need to own things, from materialistic things to individuals, everyone has a need to belong and be owned or own somebody or something and I think your exploring the issues around that with the subject being completely outside their comfort zone!

Keep it up.i can't wait too read the next one.

oooh I can't to find out what happens next!!!! update soon!!!!

oops I messed up on my comment lol can't wait to find out what happens!!! please update soon!!!

Thanks for all feedback.

"You are mind,

I have read this three times and am still not sure whether she is black or white. It probably does not matter as long as she is naked and fucked.