All Comments on 'Black Star Ch. 02: After Dark'

Brilliantly written, you have to write another chapter. Whether it has Avril in it, or not. Add one of him and Beth, maybe going to one of Avril's shows together. Just a thought.

Marvelous continuation of this blazing drama, beautifully written, very romantic. However, the previous chapter must be read before this one, to do justice to the story, the reader, and the author. Five stars.